The Lion King - First Draft

On the Thursday  my class went to the te Ahu  center  to see the lion king and I got a coke no sugar and popcorn and then we went in to the theaher. me tiena and tyson  sat by each ather and when pumba  farted and when simba  birbed we laughd. when simba came to paradise he cod not eat met he had to eat grubs   becose he cod not eat zebras and Atalanta's. My favourite part was when thay sang in the jungil. 

Wonderful Sentences

I have been learning how to copy and paste from our class writing flip charts to share our learning. I know how to insert bullet points and use the highlighting tool. 

We know that wonderful sentences need:

• detail (elaboration)
• capital letters and full stops
• Punctuation (, ! ? “ “)
• quality vocab - WOW words

WALT recognise different parts of speech.

• Nouns are naming words. eg. chair, book, July,   
• Adjectives describe nouns. eg. wooden chair, writing book, freezing July, lovely Awhi
• Verbs are doing words. eg run, walk, jump, skip, chew
• Adverbs describe verbs. eg. briskly running, slowly walking, jumping high, skipping happily and chewing noisily.

EXAMPLES  

1. The bird is angry.

2. The bluey-blackish bird is very angry.

3.The mean  blue blackish bird is angrily staring at its prey.

1.The  cat is sad.

2.The black cat is sad because its lonely.

3.The cat is sad because it haze no food.